湿女

操过了啊…”

    “嗯…我要…和他谈…了两年…逼就…没被干…过了…嗯…我…要…你操了

    …我吧……啊…”

    “我的鸡巴粗吗？喜欢吗？怎么干你”

    “啊…粗…日…我…喜欢…”

    “那次在医院操你…你会给我吗…在那护士面前操你…”

    “刘哥…我给…我那时也…想被你…操呢…你进来…日我顿吧…啊…”

    我再也忍不住了，转过身来，顾不得地上的那尿液，分开她的双腿对准那逼

    毛丛中的洞口直插进去，然后疯狂的抽动，在她一阵阵的热流刺激下，我呼喊着

    发泄出了积蓄已久的精力。

    完

    [本帖最后由樱冢澈于2009-8-1622:54编辑]＊＊＊＊＊＊总体感觉写得还不错,也不像有些写得异常夸张哈!＊＊＊＊＊＊相当一般实在没什么看点希望楼主再接再厉吧＊＊＊＊＊＊开局相当不错，可惜到了后面未免有些虎头蛇尾了，改良一下又是一篇好文章。＊＊＊＊＊＊感觉像是偷情而已，女的也不算太骚，还凑合吧＊＊＊＊＊＊一开始还有点感觉，好戏开始了，就发现到结尾了，完了？＊＊＊＊＊＊hgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgjhgj＊＊＊＊＊＊确实是，前边做了那么多的铺垫，到了最关键的时候只用了三言两语就过去了。未免虎头蛇尾＊＊＊＊＊＊写的很好很真实，特别是交代“我”的心理描写＊＊＊＊＊＊这样的好医生哪找去啊追到家去服务有两套\

    开始有感觉,关键的时候有些虎头蛇尾,望楼主再接再厉!＊＊＊＊＊＊看样子还是不错这看的最多的＊＊＊＊＊＊文章开的还不错，关键地方描写的就不怎么好了，还没结尾……(责任编辑：admin)